Susanna Leonard Hill does a lot of great work to help out aspiring author's. Today it is my turn to be helped. This is a story I've been working on since PiBoIdMo 2015 ended. The story is titled, "The Bath of Least Resistance" Take a look here and let me know; would you read it?
P.S. In the story about me, pronounced in the pancake part should be came out. Auto correct failed me again, and I failed my editing. =(