The Night of the
Ghost Spiders
“And the ghost spiders only come
out on Halloween,” Polly continued in a spooky voice as they approached the old
mansion. “With a full moon, their numbers double!”
Max scoffed at the story and strode
towards the front door.
Max’s arm tickled. He looked and
saw it covered in tiny ghost spiders. He screamed, dropped his candy bucket,
and ran away.
Polly picked up a spider from the
ground and examined it.
“Max come back! These are just the
flowers of the mootickle tree.”
Polly shrugged, picked up Max’s
bucket, and approached the house to trick or treat.
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ReplyDeleteGhost spiders, mootickle tree. Love these made up creatures. Keep writing.
Thank you Susan. Happy Halloween to you.
DeleteLoved it Greg, very creative, and a little creepy. lol
ReplyDeleteThank you Lois. Looking forward to lunch. =)
DeleteOoh, good tactic to get some extra goodies. Nice. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThat is a good tactic. =) I wasn't thinking of it that way when I wrote it. Thanks Johnell.
DeletePoor Max. Hope he recovers from his fright!
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Thanks Jen. See you Saturday.
DeleteI'm sure that mootickle flowers could be mistaken for ghost spiders!
ReplyDeleteI guess I'll have to create the tree to see. =) Thanks for stopping by Linda.
DeleteSo creative, Greg...mootickle flowers...I love that! Best of luck in Susanna's wonderful contest. ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you Vivian. Happy Halloween.
DeleteI love the sound of "mootickle tree." This is a fun Halloweensie entry. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gabi. Happy Halloween.
DeleteI enjoyed your story, Greg.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Happy Halloween.
DeleteGreat idea, loved your story!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Happy Halloween.
DeleteCreepy cool Greg!
ReplyDeleteThank you Traci.
DeleteHahaha! Poor Max! One has to wonder whether there was any intent in Polly's story to produce just such an outcome - big sisters and all :) Love the moontickle tree - so creative! Nice mix of spooky and fun! Thanks so much for joining in the contest, Greg!
ReplyDeleteThank you Susanna. Your contests are always a fun challenge for me. =)
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