A Squirrelly Valentine
(214 words)
(214 words)
“Did you see that?” asked Chipper.
“See what?” responded Twiggy.
“Bobby left his Valentine on the bench. We need to get it to
him somehow before he gets to school.”
“How can we do that? We’re just squirrels.”
“If we take the squirrel superhighway, we should beat him to
school.”
“Sounds great. Let’s go!”
They grabbed the Valentine, scurried up a tree, and leapt
branch to branch high above the ground.
The traffic was bad. But they beat Bobby to the school.
“How do we get it back to him?” asked Twiggy.
“I have an idea,” responded Chipper. “You run in circles
around his legs. While he’s stopped, I’ll drop it into his backpack from
above.”
“I love running in circles!”
“Great. Let’s hope this works.”
Twiggy circled Bobby. Chipper took aim and dropped the valentine.
A gust of wind blew it off course.
Twiggy stopped circling. Chipper joined him on the ground. Puzzled,
Bobby continued into the school.
“We tried,” sighed Chipper.
“I hope someone isn’t too disappointed,” said Twiggy.
Chipper looked at the Valentine and exclaimed, “Hey, its’
addressed to us.”
Chipper opened the Valentine and read it, “You guys are
nuts. Happy Valentine’s Day! Love, Bobby.”
“I think I’m going to cry,” sniffled Twiggy.
“I’ll get you a tissue,” replied Chipper.
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Great capture of crazy squirrels. Fun story. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank you McMarshall.
DeleteWhat a fun story! Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rose.
DeleteOh my goodness-- "You guys are nuts" had me dare I say...cracking up. Great job with the pacing and voice--really made the squirrely characters come alive!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Candice.
DeleteLove your character names and their use of the squirrel superhighway. Best wishes!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Deb.
DeleteFunny story! I wish you well with this entry.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lynn.
DeleteLoved it, especially the surprise ending. Good luck.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Angela.
DeleteSo cute and funny Greg.
ReplyDeleteHaha, did not see that coming! Good luck with the contest. The prizes are pretty amazing!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Tim. The prizes are great. I think they get better with each contest. =)
DeleteYou guys are nuts! Love it Gregory
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lauri.
DeleteLove it! It made me laugh out loud. Great Job.
ReplyDeleteGlad it made you laugh out loud. Thank you, M.A.
DeleteFun, action, and heart. What more could a reader ask for. Nicely done, Greg. Best of luck with the contest.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alayne.
DeleteLove the squirrel super highway where traffic is bad. Love the squirrel behavior and the boy's comment "You guys are nuts!" Funny and sweet story. Good luck in the contest!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jilanne. =)
DeleteLove those nutty squirrels! Best of luck.
ReplyDeleteThanks much! =)
DeleteSnap, Greg! We both thought of squirrely stories! I love yours and I wish you all the very best in the competition.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah. I didn't even think of that. =) Good luck to you too.
DeleteVery cute, Greg! I love the "squirrel superhighway"! :-) GOOD LUCK!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Becky. That highway runs through our yard. =)
DeleteHi Greg - love the idea of the squirrels determined to help their human kid ... and then find he was thinking of them .... bet it was full of nuts - lovely story ... congratulations - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hilary.
DeleteHey Greg,
ReplyDeleteGreat entry. I enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Ken
Thank you, Ken.
DeleteOh my goodness, this is so adorable and hilarious! I love the surprise ending and how touched the squirrels were that the valentine was for them! Great job Greg!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed it Debbie. Thank you!
DeleteCute story, Greg! How like a pair of nutty squirrels to be so focused on what they *think* their mission is that they don't even notice the Valentine is for them! :) Tons of fun :) Thanks so much for joining in on Valentiny!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Susanna. And thanks for another great contest. =)
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